Thursday, September 5, 2019
Car Crash
Today at 12:30 in the morning there was a car crash in front of this house in Denton texas. In the world there are 1.25 million people die from crashes in usa. here's a word from the victim of the crash “this guy is so damn dumb he crashed into a parked car “.Here's another word from the victims daughter “ this guy is a dumba** for crashing in a parked “ now word from the driver “I don't know why they're so mad I was just testing out the car to see if it had any difficulties and it did as you can see it did have some difficulties with the brakes . this is all on channel 5 news.
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this story is really good and its about me !!
ReplyDeleteI think you did good because got to the point and I understood what the whole story was about but I think you could add a little bit more about what the guy who crashed the car said but otherwise you did good I liked how you used a real world fact in your story.
ReplyDeleteIts good but add more
ReplyDeletei think you can add more to make it longer
ReplyDeletegoo story buh you were too much on the "dumba**" and yuhhhh
ReplyDeleteyou need to work on spelling, capitalization, and punctuation. like when you said ...crashes in usa.. you should have said ..crashes in *the**USA*... but other than that its an okay story.
ReplyDeletei think it can be a little bit longer also plz watch youre profanity
ReplyDeleteyou did't put a name
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