Car crashes happened on a daily basis in the Dallas area. The number and reasons is people not paying attention to the road + texting
It was a Sunday evening in Lewisville, Saray and her family decided to spend the sunny evening at the park. As they were preparing to leave their home and head to the park.they made a pit stop at the Michoacan to get some mangonadas with Smith mango. When they arrived at the park Saray gazed at the window observing the scene of the beautiful park.she and her family enjoy the park's attraction + slides. Saray and her siblings Sashenka, and leilaliy.They got in the car so sweaty from playing at the park.while they were on there way home Jose their dad was driving and they saw this drunk driver in a truck and he drove in the divider and went the opposite way. Jose stop so quick and sed ‘’f&**” cause he was bout crash. Jose got down so quick to see if the dude was okay and he seemed drunk. more people came in to see if he was okay people started to call the police. Jose got in the car because he didn't want to be involved in the accident.so we left home safely
You could add more details and some of the words were spelled wrong.You also have some run-on sentences and you could of put the word and instead of the plus sign.Other than that I loved you story.
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