Thursday, September 5, 2019
Stitches
Jonovan and his friend Marco went to the soccer field in Mexico near laderas del mirador. It was a cloudy day with a lot of wind. In Mexico, the soccer field was closed so they decided to jump a broken fence that was a dangerous decision. When they jumped the fence Jonovan fell. He did not notice that he got hurt. When he looked down he tore off a chunk of his skin on his foot and you can see all his eat and muscles the flesh was barely hanging onto his foot. He got hurt on his foot it was bad. His family rushed him to the hospital. His family was so scared and worried. Will he was there the doctors stitched him up. Later that day he noticed that he got 14 stitches. The lesson is to think before you do something.
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its a perfect story i like it its very clear and unconfuzing
ReplyDeleteits really good but it kinda dosnt make sense
ReplyDeletenice story, but you need to work on punctuation, and spelling. it also sounds a bit run-on at times, like when you said his family back to back towards the end and that they were in mexico 2x. but i overall liked the story line. :)
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